古代マヤ文明と水

On 2013/05/06, in 校正, by CECS

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The Ancient Maya, having nothing to do with mighty rivers 
 
In Tikal, which is located in the low-land of southern Maya, water is collected by making its land sloped intentionally. What is more, it is considered water saved in the upper part of the land was used for drinking, and a portion of it floated and accumulated in the lower was reused for agriculture. “Reuse”, one of environmentally conscious “3R” which is often heard in the modern society, had already been carried out in the Ancient Maya. 
 
 
The anciant Maya今回のテーマは「古代マヤ文明と水」。お送りいただいた文章では、現代の水の利用法が、古代マヤ文明で既に行われていたことについて述べられています。マヤ文明というと、よく引き合いに出されるのは「マヤ暦」ですが、数学や建築の分野でも極めて高度な技術を持っていたようです。

古代マヤ文明と現代に共通する水の利用法について、校正前と校正後の文章、併せてご覧ください。

 

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The ancient Maya

 

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Today, many people have their own computer.Thanks to this, we can get in tach with someone who live in another country more easily. For example, we can send e-mails at the low cost. Befor the computer prevailed, to contact people who live in another country is costly. People needed to call them up or to go abroad by air. Also, the Internet allows us to look over what we dont know soon. But information on the Internet is not always true. And it has problems such as the copy right.

 

Baby computer  今回のテーマは、「コンピューターが普及した現代社会において人類は何を得たのか?」。なかなか哲学的な問いですね。お送りいただいた原稿では、主にインターネットが発達した後の変化について、そこで得たものと、新たに現れた問題について説明されています。校正前と校正後の原稿、併せてご覧ください。

 

 

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Computerized World

 

職務経歴を英語で!

On 2012/10/03, in 校正, by CECS

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題名:   Try! Let me try to explain about my work experience

Type of industry/business 
IT Temporary Placement Services
Your job title/position held
IT Specialist / web developer
work experience
Developing fully featured Ecommerce websites, New design and full support for the life of the website.
Planning Web application system. As one of only three developers, I was largely responsible for the front-end of the system, which was coded in PHP and made early use of Javascript to create a rich user experience.
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Type of industry/business
information technology vendor
Your job title/position held
IT Specialist / web developer
work experience
Responsible for client meetings and evaluation. Assessed projects and assigned Web developers based on specialty. Designed and implemented web pages for various corporate clients. Site specialties included company home pages, e-commerce.
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Type of industry/business
IT Temporary Placement Services
Your job title/position held
IT Specialist / web developer
work experience
Responsible for client meetings and evaluation. Assessed projects and assigned Web developers based on specialty. Designed and implemented web pages for various corporate clients. Site specialties included company home pages, e-commerce.
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Type of industry/business
Health Care
Your job title/position held
web developer
Temporary Placement Services,Permanent Placement Services,Outplacement Services,Outsourcing and Training Services

 

Writing Resume今回のテーマは「職務経歴を英語で!」
CECSへのお問い合わせの中でも、かなり多いのが、和文履歴書から英文履歴書の作成依頼です。残念ながらCECSでは翻訳はしていませんので、現状ではご依頼いただいても、すべてお断りしております・・・。

ただ、その状況を見たエディターから、「英文履歴書を簡単に作成できるようなテンプレートサイトを作ろう」との声が上がり、実現に向けてアイデアを出し合っています。
できるだけ近いうちに(?)形にするつもりですので、ご期待ください。

 

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Let me explain my work experience

 

Excitng day

On 2012/09/22, in 校正, by CECS

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題名:  excitng day 

Today I talked to a woman of Foreiner.
Usaly I greet her on the street. Only gleeting. But today when I found her,she had a raket of squash.So I asked her where did she plaied.She saied that she plaied in gym at near subway. I asked her that may I jyoin with her. She was willing to OK. I exciting next week!

  

Meet foreigner on the street

今日のテーマは「Exting day」
いつも道で挨拶する外国人女性に、いっしょにスカッシュをしないかと誘うエッセイです。

外国人が日本に滞在する理由は様々ですが、彼らと交流してみると、意外なほど日本人の友達が少いことに気づきます。
言葉の問題もありますが、学校や会社以外で、日本人と交流する機会がないのも原因かもしれません。

母国を離れて寂しさを感じている人も多いですから、積極的に話しかけたら相手も嬉しいと思いますよ。

 

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ハイデガーに関する考察

On 2012/09/17, in 校正, by CECS

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題名: free correction

In this essay, I want to show some of the deep ecological insights found in Heidegger philosophical discourse. The paper is based on his approach towards things that leads to the human self-realization. This realization coerces the shift from anthropocentrism and dualism to biocentrism and non-dualism. It strongly against the calculative mode of thinking that things are merely objects of human consciousness. The study is an attempt to subscribe an answer towards the ecological problems. Firstly, the paper discusses deep ecology and Heidegger’s approaches toward environmental crisis. Secondly, I will show the distinctive ecological materials inherent in Heidegger’s work that has influenced the deep ecologists and critically examine them in terms of a radical shift of understanding. Third, I defend Heidegger against the charged of his critics, denying the existence of deep ecological insights simply on the ground of his political affiliation with Nazism.

 

Heidegger今日のテーマは、「ハイデガーに関する考察」です。
ブログではエッセイや、受験用英作文などを取り上げていますが、CECSの仕事の大半は、ちょっと難しい研究論文だったりします。
文字数はちょっと多めですが、初のインド人投稿者ということで、添削させていただく運びとなりました。

マルティン・ハイデガー
ドイツの哲学者(1989-1976)。著名な著作として「存在と時間」など。

大戦中のナチス・ドイツ加担問題や、弟子ハンナ・アーレントとの不倫関係などのエピソードでも知られる。

 

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