Excitng day

On 2012/09/22, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: hana

Subject: exciting day

Today I talked to a woman of Foreiner.
Usaly I greet her on the street. Only gleeting. But today when I found her,she had a raket of squash.So I asked her where did she plaied.She saied that she plaied in gym at near subway. I asked her that may I jyoin with her. She was willing to OK. I exciting next week!


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An essay about Hedegger

On 2012/09/17, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: batskhem

Subject: free correction

In this essay, I want to show some of the deep ecological insights found in Heidegger philosophical discourse. The paper is based on his approach towards things that leads to the human self-realization. This realization coerces the shift from anthropocentrism and dualism to biocentrism and non-dualism. It strongly against the calculative mode of thinking that things are merely objects of human consciousness. The study is an attempt to subscribe an answer towards the ecological problems. Firstly, the paper discusses deep ecology and Heidegger’s approaches toward environmental crisis. Secondly, I will show the distinctive ecological materials inherent in Heidegger’s work that has influenced the deep ecologists and critically examine them in terms of a radical shift of understanding. Third, I defend Heidegger against the charged of his critics, denying the existence of deep ecological insights simply on the ground of his political affiliation with Nazism.


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One more week to go

On 2012/09/14, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Asuka

Subject: One more week to go

I am going to attend a wedding party of my brother next week. My daughter and I intend to play the piano duet at the reception. My daughter have been going to piano lessons. As for me, I stoped taking piano lessons when I was a high-school student. I don’t have much time left to practice playing the piano. But I do my best I can.  


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On 2012/09/11, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Asuka

Subject: earrings

I had my ears pierced in a clinic yesterday. This was the second time that I visited the clinic and I had already one pierced earring on each of my ears. We can easily get piercers at general stores these days. Many people pierced on their ears by themselves. But I believe that piercing in a clinic is better and safer than that by ourselves.


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CECS Proofreading Special version

On 2012/09/06, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by:  Tokunaga

Subject:  my summer vacation

his year as soon as summer vacation has started i have been to an international school in the uk for three weeks since july 15.

this trip was a very big decision for me. because traveling by plane alon is a big adventure for me . i was very worried about the country where i cannot make myself understood in japanese.
at the same time as i have learned english for four years. i really wanted to talk with people from all over the world.
the next day i arrived in england i went to school. at first i was afraid that i cannot make friends . as soon as i arrived at school some people spoke to me.

“i know japanese manga onepiace!” “i know naruto too!”

like this .once we started talking iwas able to make friends.

of all especially i became friends with a japanese girl who lives in chiba,an italian boy,and a czech boy.
the italian boy likes naruto(japanese charector),so he always practiced speaking naruto,s line in japanese.
the czech boy was so glutton that he often took us to the hamburger shop.
they are very talktive and loud. staying with them was very fun.
we did various things after school every day. forexample we went to downtown to eat hamburger, went to park, did our homework together.


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