SNS Profile

On 2012/08/16, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by:  Ultra May

Subject: SNS Profile

Hello! I am Japanese, living in Gifu Prefecture, Japan. Like many Japanese, I’m very interested in English but despite years of efforts, my English is still not good enough. I really hope with your help, I can improve my English. If you are learning Japanese, I’ll be willing to help you as much as I can. However, to be honest, like the former prime minister of Japan, I’m not good at Kanji. So please don’t ask me about very difficult Kanji. :) 

 

Response( Editor: Echo)

SNS Profile

 

Medical Faculty 2

On 2012/08/15, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Ayako

Subject: Medical Faculty 2

[1] The invention of electron microscopes enables scientists to examine more profound structure of nature compared with use of standard microscopes. 

[2] The flu is a contagious respiratory disease which is caused by influenza virus. It brings about various diseases which are from slight to serious, and sometimes leads to death.

 

Response( Editor: Echo)

Medical Faculty2

 

Medical Faculty

On 2012/08/13, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Ayako

Subject: Medical Faculty

[1] Antibiotics are effective medicines against the contagion of bacteria. They prevent bacteria from living or propagating in the human body. 

[2] Zinc is indispensable for appropriate functions of the immunity system in the human body. And, it plays very important role in devision and growth of cells, the healing of wounds and the decomposiotion of carbonhydrates.

[3] The health problems of the people who live in rural area can become more severe before they are dignosed by doctor, because it’s sometimes difficult to take medical treatments. Certain research show that, in the United States, those who live in rural area tend to have greater possibility to get a chronic disease than those who live in urban area.

 

Response( Editor: Echo)

Medical Faculty

 

Entrance Exam

On 2012/08/11, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Yoshida

Subject: University Entrance Exam

  [Question]
In Japan, some high schools prohibit students from having part-time jobs, even though they are legally allowed to work. Do you agree with such a school policy or not?

[My answer]
I disagree with such a school policy. It has many good aspects to have part-time jobs. You can know what jobs are really like by having part-time jobs. It seems preparation of your future. Of course if you spend many times on working, you can’t leave many times to study or play with friends, but I think the experiences of having jobs are even more worth than to study or play. That is why high schools should allow them to have part-time jobs and you should have the choice.

 

Response( Editor: Echo)

Entrance Exam

 

Effective ways to learn English

On 2012/08/09, in Proofreading, by CECS

E-mail sent by: Okada

Subject: Effective ways to learn English

there are many ways Ⅰ learn English effectively. the most important thing is to be accustomed to English. Custom makes all things easy. One of them , It is reading English paper.Ⅰ am reading it every day. It is my custom to do so. Ⅰ am oftem reading it while Ⅰ am taking a train. Ⅰt is convenient that we can read anywhere anytime, And English paper is used many practical business vocabulary. of course, there are also many vocabulary in ordinary spoken and written English on English paper.

 

Response( Editor: Echo)

Effective ways to learn English